下面是一篇關(guān)于該不該關(guān)心國(guó)際時(shí)事的托福范文,在文章的內(nèi)容和結(jié)構(gòu)上安排的都是比較合理的,思路清晰,文章層次也很分明,總的來(lái)講,是一篇不錯(cuò)的托福范文。各位準(zhǔn)備參加托福考試的考生可以試著借鑒一下,看看托福范文的寫(xiě)作手法和方式,找到創(chuàng)作的思路。
題目:該不該關(guān)心國(guó)際時(shí)事?!
我心中的第一想法:去他媽的,跟我有嘛關(guān)系?(真的是第一想法,有些粗俗,一閃而過(guò))第二找原因,一般湊出來(lái)三條:
a.國(guó)際時(shí)事要大量背景知識(shí),咱沒(méi)這些知識(shí)
b.看這些事實(shí)需大量時(shí)間,咱沒(méi)時(shí)間
c. 咱聽(tīng)到國(guó)際時(shí)事基本都不是嘛好事,讓咱不爽
接下來(lái)就要寫(xiě)了,我一步一步寫(xiě):
第一步:
Whether we should pay attention to global events, different people will have different ideas due to their
background. As for me I strongly disagree with the idea and the reasons are as follows.
Firstly, to analyse global events needs lot’s of background knowledge that is too much for us. In short it is not possible for us to understand the events.
Secondly, it is so great a task to read news papers and webpages to get the global events that cost too much time. In conclusion to pay attention to global events is too time consuming a task for us.
Last but not least, most global events that come to us are unhappy things. So we should not make us unpleasent by learning the global events.
In conclusion, we should not pay attention to global events. It needs too much knowledge that we don’t have, and it is time costing. Also global events always make us unhappy.
看出來(lái)了嗎?模板就是
開(kāi)頭:?jiǎn)栴}點(diǎn)明+廢話+自己想法
Firstly,原因一開(kāi)頭中心句。原因一結(jié)尾總結(jié)句。
Secondly,原因二開(kāi)頭中心句。原因二結(jié)尾總結(jié)句。
Last but not least,原因三開(kāi)頭中心句。原因三結(jié)尾總結(jié)句。
結(jié)尾:自己想法+三點(diǎn)原因的中心句
在屏幕上打出這些字應(yīng)該用掉三分之一的時(shí)間了,剩下時(shí)間給每段寫(xiě)例子。
第二步:
Whether we should pay attention to global events, different people will have different ideas due to their
background. As for me I strongly disagree with the idea and the reasons are as follows.
Firstly, to analyse global events needs lot’s of background knowledge that is too much for us. Take the middle east war as an example. Those countries fight each other because comples reasons, and event these reasons are related to too much background knowledge we don’t know. So it is impossible for us to understand the war, and to know these events is not meaningful. 這再來(lái)了例子,仿照上面,謝謝某國(guó)選舉,咱看了也一頭霧水。 In short it is not possible for us to understand the events.
Secondly, it is so great a task to read news papers and webpages to get the global events that cost too much time.Most of us are busy every day, and time is precious. However there are countless news every day, so how is it possible for us to choose and read the global events? A good example is the news webpages. You will feel crazy when you see the pages full of news. To read the new swill waste our time because we have something more important to do. In conclusion to pay attention to global events is too time consuming a task for us.
Last but not least, most global events that come to us are unhappy things. It seems that people are more interested in news of dark side, so nowadays medias are filled with bad news. For instance whenever I turn on the TV, most news are unhappy ones, such as terrorism, earthquake, murder, disaster and so on. They all make me feel sad, and influeced my studying effeciency or even make me amnesea.So we should not make us unpleasent by learning the global events.
In conclusion, we should not pay attention to global events. It needs too much knowledge that we don’t have, and it is time costing. Also global events always make us unhappy.
本人感覺(jué)這樣寫(xiě)是比較有效率且安全的,首先,寫(xiě)例子時(shí)折斷的前后兩句始終提醒你不會(huì)跑題;第二,三段寫(xiě)下來(lái)長(zhǎng)短大致相同,不會(huì)出現(xiàn)不平衡;第三,就算出現(xiàn)時(shí)間不夠,也不會(huì)說(shuō)是沒(méi)有文章結(jié)尾而導(dǎo)致嚴(yán)重結(jié)構(gòu)問(wèn)題。